Comedy...stand-up and otherwise...
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TT...so what is your style
Story teller? Observational Humor? One Liner? Experimental? Comparison comic ("white people like....."), Hacky def jam? I want a full report on this one.
Story teller? Observational Humor? One Liner? Experimental? Comparison comic ("white people like....."), Hacky def jam? I want a full report on this one.
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the video is on fb. i have it in email and will put it here if someone knows how or i can email to soeone to put here
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So I just watched. Nice job. You looked very comfortable and well prepared. Pretty solid material for a first go at it. As someone who is not near you to show up, I say keep doing it. Just from what I know on the swamp you have some great stuff in your life to find material. Well done!
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I believe you can just use the Facebook URL and the software of phpBB will embed it like a YouTube vid or Instagram post.
mister d wrote:Couldn't have pegged me better.
EnochRoot wrote:I mean, whatever. Johnnie's all hot cuz I ride him.
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Echo this.wlu_lax6 wrote: ↑Wed May 22, 2019 8:02 am So I just watched. Nice job. You looked very comfortable and well prepared. Pretty solid material for a first go at it. As someone who is not near you to show up, I say keep doing it. Just from what I know on the swamp you have some great stuff in your life to find material. Well done!
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Try it for me? i cant get fb to give me a link
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(At first I fucked up and shared it to my page. Congrats. That's the first thing I've "posted" to Facebook in over 2 years.)
mister d wrote:Couldn't have pegged me better.
EnochRoot wrote:I mean, whatever. Johnnie's all hot cuz I ride him.
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Just watched it. Impressive! I thought you did great. You've got some good material to work with.
You should feel very good about that.
You should feel very good about that.
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OMG, that shit was hilarious, btw. Loving the Gremlins joke.
mister d wrote:Couldn't have pegged me better.
EnochRoot wrote:I mean, whatever. Johnnie's all hot cuz I ride him.
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thank you. also thanks for the free share. I love that the gremlins joke made a black guy come up after and tell me im a racist and black crowds arr going to hate me so in hindsight i reallllly like that joke
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In this era, it's the mark of a good joke. Keep telling them. I routinely have an opener in my head if I ever had the balls to go on stage to something of the tune of "I don't support the troops" and going off about it. It would be a dream of mine to anger Veteran Justice Warriors.
(And I quickly deleted the share. Sorry to tell you that, but I'm not engaging with Facebook until I'm retired.)
mister d wrote:Couldn't have pegged me better.
EnochRoot wrote:I mean, whatever. Johnnie's all hot cuz I ride him.
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You crushed it. Great jokes, and you look natural on stage. You should definitely stick with it and keep going. Is your fiance OK with your material, because damn, a lot of women wouldn't be cool with it. You went hard.
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Just watched...I think you did a great job. The natural life experience/story telling approach really works for you. If you really enjoyed it I hope you keep working at it.
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no....i didntThe Sybian wrote: ↑Wed May 22, 2019 11:54 am You crushed it. Great jokes, and you look natural on stage. You should definitely stick with it and keep going. Is your fiance OK with your material, because damn, a lot of women wouldn't be cool with it. You went hard.
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i love her because she genuinely will let me say anything if it might be funny
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I try to refrain from giving relationship advice, but she sounds like a keeper.
Other than her big boobs and great smile, the first thing that made me realize that my wife was "the one" was her occasionally nasty sense of humour.
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She is amazing and i love her...if nothing else i have to keep the relationship because she gives me material without trying
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Man, these guys are hilarious.
mister d wrote:Couldn't have pegged me better.
EnochRoot wrote:I mean, whatever. Johnnie's all hot cuz I ride him.
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If you look at the whole body of work Bill Hader is probably the funniest SNLer of the 21st century.
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The last time someone casually mentioned doing an SNL draft, I immediately pictured Hader being my first pick and everyone else going "oh, damn I didn't think of him this high but that's actually really good!"
he’s a fixbking cyborg or some shit. The
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You could make a case for Tracy Morgan, Kristin Wiig, or Kate McKinnon, but yeah I agree that it's Hader. And I think I mentioned it before, but he's the only one who totally gets a pass when he corpses. If anything, it's funnier.
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I want to add Maya Rudolph, but that's probably incorrect.
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if anybody wants to see a video of me trying to go dark humor and bombing gimme an email address. i wont ever post it online but yall can watch it
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so i might hypothetically have a friend willing to flash her tits at a comedy club for 20$ for a bit about saving money on strip clubs. I cannot possibly see me not at least trying that joke tuesday
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If you can get that up on Twitter, you might get famous!
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I know I did this once before here, but the video I put on facebook Im a lot more proud of than any other 3 minutes ive ever done. If any of you want to take the time to watch it I would welcome some honest feedback. Also, there is one joke in there that I am extremely proud of. It fucking killed even though my delivery wasnt the best. If one of you could take the video off facebook and put it here i would appreciate it...Johnnie, if you can manage to not share it again maybe?
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Here you go.
mister d wrote:Couldn't have pegged me better.
EnochRoot wrote:I mean, whatever. Johnnie's all hot cuz I ride him.
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Like the pain killer drug dealer age premise. Could see that developing into a solid bunch of minutes and call back closer.
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This is such a hilarious take on talk shows. Tig Noraro is oblivious to pop culture, and has to guess the name of famous celebrity guests, and what they are famous for.
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Six weeks agoish I came on here and posted a couple open mic things, just trying to have hobbies and shit, and today I got a text confirming my first actual gig on july 15th. its only going to be 10 minutes but still. I feel like thats not fucking bad for six weeks
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That is amazing!TT2.0 wrote: ↑Thu Jul 04, 2019 1:53 am Six weeks agoish I came on here and posted a couple open mic things, just trying to have hobbies and shit, and today I got a text confirming my first actual gig on july 15th. its only going to be 10 minutes but still. I feel like thats not fucking bad for six weeks
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Not bad at all, dude. Not bad at all. You've had a quite a last few months. You should be proud of what you're doing with your life.TT2.0 wrote: ↑Thu Jul 04, 2019 1:53 am Six weeks agoish I came on here and posted a couple open mic things, just trying to have hobbies and shit, and today I got a text confirming my first actual gig on july 15th. its only going to be 10 minutes but still. I feel like thats not fucking bad for six weeks
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That's awesome. I feel like I'm following a live version of The Marvelous Mr. TT
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That is, in fact, awesome TT. Congrats.
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Niiiiice!!
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EnochRoot wrote:I mean, whatever. Johnnie's all hot cuz I ride him.
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Thanks yall. im gonna have a couple people record it. Its really cool to me that I can literally look back at this thread and see how much ive grown as a comic.Ive spent 2 months cutting down 68 minutes into 10. this shit is going to kill
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Keep it, man. Look forward to seeing the video.
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