Quick copywriting advice that can be deleted afterwards by that cunt Jeeves
Moderators: Shirley, Sabo, brian, rass, DaveInSeattle
Quick copywriting advice that can be deleted afterwards by that cunt Jeeves
Hey frogs, which is appropriate:
1. "However, as the global specter of terrorism increases...." (I used this initially)
2. "However, as the global specter of terrorism grows..." (leaning towards this)
3. Neither are proper uses of the word specter (I might be a moron)
1. "However, as the global specter of terrorism increases...." (I used this initially)
2. "However, as the global specter of terrorism grows..." (leaning towards this)
3. Neither are proper uses of the word specter (I might be a moron)
Pack a vest for your james in the city of intercourse
- Johnny Carwash
- The Dude
- Posts: 5958
- Joined: Mon Mar 11, 2013 8:57 am
- Location: Land of 10,000 Sununus
Re: Quick copywriting advice that can be deleted afterwards by that cunt Jeeves
My non-professional opinion would be #2. A "specter" being a singular thing makes "grow" sound more appropriate than "increase."
Fanniebug wrote: P.S. rass! Dont write me again, dude! You're in ignore list!
Re: Quick copywriting advice that can be deleted afterwards by that cunt Jeeves
Seconded.Johnny Carwash wrote:My non-professional opinion would be #2. A "specter" being a singular thing makes "grow" sound more appropriate than "increase."
THERE’S NOTHING WRONG WITH GALA LUNCHEONS, LAD!
Re: Quick copywriting advice that can be deleted afterwards by that cunt Jeeves
Two is nice. It makes the specter seem like it's alive rather than just an inanimate threat.
he’s a fixbking cyborg or some shit. The
holy fuckbAllZ, what a ducking nightmare. Holy shot. Just, fuck. The
holy fuckbAllZ, what a ducking nightmare. Holy shot. Just, fuck. The
Re: Quick copywriting advice that can be deleted afterwards by that cunt Jeeves
Who knows? Maybe, you were kidnapped, tied up, taken away and held for ransom.
Those days are gone forever
Over a long time ago
Oh yeah…
Those days are gone forever
Over a long time ago
Oh yeah…
- govmentchedda
- The Dude
- Posts: 12758
- Joined: Mon Mar 11, 2013 4:36 pm
Re: Quick copywriting advice that can be deleted afterwards by that cunt Jeeves
I'm with you. Leaning towards #2.
Until everything is less insane, I'm mixing weed with wine.
- The Sybian
- The Dude
- Posts: 18969
- Joined: Tue Mar 19, 2013 10:36 am
- Location: Working in the Crap Part of Jersey
Re: Quick copywriting advice that can be deleted afterwards by that cunt Jeeves
#2
An honest to God cult of personality - formed around a failed steak salesman.
-Pruitt
-Pruitt
Re: Quick copywriting advice that can be deleted afterwards by that cunt Jeeves
Thought so. Thanks a bunch, toads.
Pack a vest for your james in the city of intercourse
- Steve of phpBB
- The Dude
- Posts: 8515
- Joined: Mon Mar 11, 2013 10:44 am
- Location: Feeling gravity's pull
Re: Quick copywriting advice that can be deleted afterwards by that cunt Jeeves
#2 also.
I was playing around with "global specter of terrorism" versus "specter of global terrorism," but your version works better.
Also, one of the definitions of specter is "object or source of terror." There may technically be some redundancy in using "specter of terrorism," but I don't think it's a problem.
I was playing around with "global specter of terrorism" versus "specter of global terrorism," but your version works better.
Also, one of the definitions of specter is "object or source of terror." There may technically be some redundancy in using "specter of terrorism," but I don't think it's a problem.
And his one problem is he didn’t go to Russia that night because he had extracurricular activities, and they froze to death.
Re: Quick copywriting advice that can be deleted afterwards by that cunt Jeeves
Maybe, though I think one terror is an emotion and the other is like, a noun. Or something.
Pack a vest for your james in the city of intercourse